Score: 2

"Great Game..."

submission: Shadow Factory

date: February 8, 2007

...Very Poorly Executed. Your graphics and content is there, but the gameplay is useless! Its hard to control, sluggish, I mean, if you leave your car on level 1 and don't move it at all, you automatically fall off the edge, talk about annoying. Buff up on the code and resubmit if you want anything half decent.

Score: 9

"Brilliant"

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep 4

date: September 20, 2006

Alvin, once again you amaze us with your Spriteing Genius. Its a Landmark and Outstanding series that you continue to pull off. Each ephisode beats the previous in terms of great action, serious plots and comical Luigi Genius. You are my main inspiration in the Sprite Genre as your use of Superstar Saga sprites has inspired me to use similar techniques. I agree with other reviewers when I say your Click to Skip action was better than the new Space, but nethertheless, its your Flash and its admirable to see you change it for your viewers benefit, not for your own. I look forward to the next installment and can't wait to learn from and enjoy your masterpeice battle sequences that set the bar so very high for all us ametuers trying to follow in your collosal footsteps.

Score: 4

"Not to my Tastes"

submission: Rats on Cocaine - Ep # 1

date: September 20, 2006

First off this movie wasn't really to my tastes. Its a bit to Hardcore like a previous reviewer mentioned, and the jokes weren't really that funny to me, a 4/10 at a strong push (As voted here). However, and its a big however, I can see the effort and why its quite good, especially from the time it was made, and I understand why other would find it funny, thats why I voted 5 on the vote that counts! ^^ You should be/are proud of it and keep it up, but it's not my personal interest... But nethertheless, its a brilliant peice of work for others to enjoy!
Well Done!

Score: 2

"Cocky"

submission: My first stick fight

date: September 10, 2006

I think your way too Cocky... What makes you think anyone would ask you to make more anyway? It was hardly Groundbreaking Work... I'd like to see what 'Better things to do than make Stick Movies' you do because they probably won't be much better... I admit, the movies bad and will definelty get blammed, but that doesn't mean your a bad artist. I like your style and that must have taken a lot of hard work. I'm not flaming you as I think you are promising and could become a good artist. Keep Practising and don't get upset or worry if this doesn't get through the portal!

Score: 10

"Wow..."

submission: TANKMEN

date: July 1, 2006

The Best Submission I've seen on NG All Week! Can't wait for more... The Style of art is very kewl!

Keep up the good work!

Score: 5

"I Despise Clocks, Locks and Glocks!"

submission: Super Secret Commando

date: June 29, 2006

I Despise Clocks, Locks and Glocks!

But for this its an exception... That wasn't half bad!
The Animation was very smooth and kewl, but the only reason I won't pass it was because it was so short... Make it longer and re-post it

Score: 4

"Meh"

submission: Metal Gear Mario

date: June 27, 2006

[Cons]
- No Air Background
- Mario Title Jumps to different Placement
- Sound Effects could be Better
- WAY Too much Radial and Linear Gradients
- Naff Scenery and Backgrounds
- Seperate Parts (Eyes and Hands) look badly distorted
- Pipe appears/dissapears from Nowhere
- No Voice Overs, just Text
- When DaKoop & Liquid Luigi are talking DaKoop is a lot bigger than Luigi which shouldn't be right
- Sprites seem to have been Mixed and Matched from different Bit Formats
- Guns are Naff
- Megaman Bit was Messed Up
- Mario Doesn't hold Rifle Properly
- Flashback is Pretty Poor Quality and Concept
- As Funny as it was I doubt a Sniper Would call Up telling you he has a Clear Shot ^^
- Hate the Cooltext Logo
- Koopa at Credits Doesn't hold Shotgun Properly

[Pros]
- Dancing in Lift was Funny
- Sprites aren't that Bad
- Good Humor and Irony
- CCTV Camera Screen when Luigi & Koop are talking looks very Good
- Nice Music
- Guns are Plausable
- Knocked Out Sprite is Kewl
- Nice Coloration
- Sniper Koop Part was Classic
- Nice Ending

[Overall]
Hopefully these comments will help you improve your work...

Score: 4

"Good, but not NG"

submission: Life Sucks at 40

date: June 16, 2006

Thats a good short taster of your book, which sounds good, but isn't really what NG is for. NG is for sharing Flash Games and Movies, not really for Advertisements. You have the potential to make good flashes, so keep it up, but this one isn't NG Enough..

Score: 7

"SMB + Sprites = Fantastic!"

submission: SMB: The Key Grab

date: June 13, 2006

SMB + Sprites = Fantastic!
This is great, I probably gave it more because I'm planning to release a TBC SM Game in the upcomming week, and have spent ages watching SMB Movies to get inspiration. This had great sprites and the inventive use of your own (Monkey's) was genius. I didn't like the Hasslehoff Parts as it made it seem a bit tacky, but the concept and humor behind the reference was good. The voice acting got a bit stale with the same guy, but I can appreciate the effort when its just one person you can find to do it. But enough of the negatives, It was very funny and you should make more, in short!

Score: 8

"Great!"

submission: Animator vs. Animation

date: June 13, 2006

Just what I wanted out of a Movie. It offers great style, like no other! The way you pieced it together was brilliant... I'm Looking forward to future submissions ^^